Open Poetry #15 |
Riding The Crest Of Your Wave |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I have battled the waves of loneliness and sunk deeply into the depths of despair alone in these turbulent waters with no life raft to cling to But then the skies cleared and the seas calmed and I saw you sailing towards me You enveloped me within the safety of your arms and I found the comfort I had craved How easily I sailed into your heart and docked outside the door to your soul I was captivated by your love as we rode our own waves of passion as my loneliness was forgotten and was taken away with the outgoing tide Suetang |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"But then the skies cleared and the seas calmed and I saw you sailing towards me You enveloped me within the safety of your arms and I found the comfort I had craved" Beautiful romantic writing! Well done indeed! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sue, How beautiful is this.... once again Well Done!!! Thank You |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This gave me goose bumps of joy! What a beautiful write! Cindi |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very nice use of metaphors here, Sue -- the feelings come across with the trade-winds... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for reading this one and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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