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Open Poetry #15

you make me wish

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2001-08-24 01:53 PM

you make me wish I had been born with wings
so I could cross these stormy seas and fly to you

you make me wish I had a wish
for every wish I've wished 'pon you

you make me wish for things yet unattained
to be more and better than I have been

you make me wish for stars and moonlight
to caress your sweet cheek at night

you make me wish I was with you
to see the sun in her morning rise

you make me wish for my secret wishes
you make me wish for forever
fairytales
happy endings

you make me wish

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

1 posted 2001-08-24 02:13 PM

love the poem hun! It reminds me of that sunrise I dragged you out of bed to watch and makes me long for the next

Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

2 posted 2001-08-24 02:25 PM

ugh ya mean the sunrise I snoozed thru? er oopsie I mean...yes dear it was beautiful!
(I never said I was a morning person and Colin can be downright HYPERACTIVE in the mornings....)
*grins*
~H

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

3 posted 2001-08-24 02:42 PM

beautiful

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-24 03:38 PM

very nicely written... I enjoyed!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-08-24 04:13 PM

You make me wish
of thousands things
and more......

I loved it....a wonderful write....

Thank you
**********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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