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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-08-24 10:58 AM


I hold the wheel firm
tonight I’ll drive, you relax
I know where to go

~*~

Be the passenger
I will get you there safely
let me drive tonight

~*~

I can go faster
but you’ll have to buckle up
and hold on tightly

~*~

I can go slower
so you can enjoy the view
which do you prefer?

~*~

Sit back and enjoy
either way, it’s a long ride
tonight, let me drive


~SEA~



© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-24 11:04 AM


darn girl... drive slowly..the scenery is always a pleasant part of the ride...

nice...very nice...


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2 posted 2001-08-24 11:20 AM


gladly. . .

wonderfully done. . . each little piece is like a conversation that we've been given the pleasure of listening to. . . before drifting off. . . knowing that we're in good hands. . .

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3 posted 2001-08-24 11:57 PM


Seems I'm always the one driving.  It sounds so inviting to let someone else take the wheel while I stare out the window, dozing in and out.  Love the idea of this.
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4 posted 2001-08-25 06:19 AM


Well SEA, funny thing is, I did not think you were in a car at all! ROTFLMBO

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

Rick
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5 posted 2001-08-25 09:25 AM


Dear Sea, this sounds like the gesture of a loving person who is not only thoughtful but concerned in the consequences of what could be, you are a diplomate through and through.

Hope you had a nice safe trip.

Rick

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6 posted 2001-08-25 09:48 AM


whoohoooooo.....bet you must be a great driver Sea....and what a way to present your style of driving..... Like it.  

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-08-25 09:52 AM


Lovely
Soft and gentle thoughts
You may take control

Rex

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8 posted 2001-08-25 10:18 AM


OK

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