Open Poetry #15 |
you make me think |
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
you make me think of lying in soft green fields back to the earth and heart to the sky you make me think of a haunting melody that plays over the pages of time you make me think of wild stormy seas that swallows sailors unaware you make me think of gently falling snow covering everything in its mantle so pure you make me think of northbound birds drawn towards their fair homelands you make me think of the timelessness of true love you make me think of forever fairytales happy endings you make me think |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ 'you make me think of the timelessness of true love you make me think of forever' I just love that forever stuff~ So good to see you posting, my friend~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Well my love, I think you make me think I like it. In fact, I don't think I need to think about it. I love it! Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely thoughts to visit |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* I miss your work, yanno? I LOVE this though. Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor. |
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ramrog Member
since 2001-08-22
Posts 50 |
very nice. I like how those thoughts are not all happy romantic thoughts. Kind of hits home that way |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sweetly written..I enjoyed your thoughts ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like happy endings... BIG HUGS |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so beautifully written and so much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's so nice to read you again!!!! This is wonderful..it made ME think.. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful images...and powerful ending |
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