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The Underminer (Senryu)
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The Underminer (Senryu) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Was your betrayal very lucrative for you? You Mine Pyrite Well |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Hopefully the false Judas found no buyers. You pen a stinging consumer alert. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
honesty not mined found in time a fool and their gold both lose shine |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
amazing senryu...speaks reams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ Ahhhh ... perfect !  Nicely done~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done! I enjoyed as usual |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
One would have to be a fool to betray such gold... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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