Open Poetry #15 |
Poem: "To My Love" |
GracefullyPoetic Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14AZ, USA |
Love walked in When I saw you My heart didn't know Just what to do I looked at you And there you were Where my heart would take me I was not sure. I took a risk Upon loving you But then of course What else could I do? I loved you then And I love you now Surround me love With your words With your voice With the love that never changes. More lovely than a sea-swept storm You came into my life Removing all fear and strife You were my anchor The heart of my soul Each day Your words Are what kept me whole. Even when we are far apart I know that we are still one in heart..... This poem is lovingly dedicated to my long-time friend & boyfriend Jonathan, that I have known for almost 11 years. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a very nice dedication indeed... nice to meet you and welcome to PIP. I enjoyed the read and the thoughts. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heather, welcome to Passions! A tribute to a longtime friend is one of the best ways to make an entrance into your new poetic home. Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Even when we are far apart I know that we are still one in heart." Nice expression of the feeling of love...James |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Grace This is just beautiful...Welcome to passions...you have a wonderful way of writing! Hope you like it here! Another Arizonan I see!!! welcome! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gracefully, Welcome and I enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello and welcome! Very sweet and tender write. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much welcome to passions look forward for more |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hello and welcome to Passions. I hope to read more... |
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GracefullyPoetic Junior Member
since 2001-08-23
Posts 14AZ, USA |
Thank you for all for your lovely compliments on my poetry, and for welcoming me to "Passions In Poetry." You are all wonderful poets, and I will continue to let you know that by critiquing your poems. Thanks again, and God bless every poet here, and in the world!
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
You are true to your name....you have written with grace A big ~!*WELCOME*!~ to you! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." ~Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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