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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
 in this life having stood on eternity’s shoulder neither the graveled feel nor the cloak of dust clinging to my soul’s sole is closer than my reverie, as I still reach for you we’ve traversed afar still your touch lingers gently, softer than the moth of morn brushing my cheek liquid comes the fire that reminds me again how you held me in your eyes horizon’s gold gracing meet of blue does not unite as closely the trust we’ve shared in our care of soul we’re joined ever closer than the blend of dusk to twilight spirits interlace to hail our mourn as we enjoin awareness again, so walk, walk along, knowing I shall be there, as here, in this life, waiting  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, This is an excellent write. Very much enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are indeed, always there, fine Lady...  Very nice write..  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah and woeful the wistful wait, dusk to twilight meet each night and win the war of blended bond in starlit darkness, we await a kismet's dawn where Love's eyes meet and hope it's light is there to spark us. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as I still reach for you we’ve traversed afar still your touch lingers gently, softer than the moth of morn brushing my cheek liquid comes the fire that reminds me again how you held me in your eyes horizon’s gold gracing meet of blue does not unite as closely the trust we’ve shared in our care of soul we’re joined ever closer than the blend of dusk to twilight spirits interlace to hail our mourn as we enjoin awareness again, so walk, walk along, knowing I shall be there, as here, in this life, waiting =================================== every word...Lady... every last beautiful, perfect, poetic word ... and once again...I will take this one for my own... my collection of Lady treasures grow... thank you  jmFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ 'liquid comes the fire that reminds me again how you held me in your eyes' Ahhhh, your thoughts hold pure rays of sunshine gently~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"we’ve traversed afar still your touch lingers gently, softer than the moth of morn" Lovely, Lady! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful, just absolutely fan-tab-ulous! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Lady, in this life, early lives, and in the future lives, your pen flowed out words to set the soul to wandering, looking for what you have described...very nice write...very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well on that gentle note of being touched by the whisper of your words, I shall say goodnight and tell you that was absolutely breathtaking. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think I shall save this one forever..I love it ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--Your poem takes me to where I have always been...does that make sense? It is beautiful indeed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect....just perfect. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
These two lines especially grabbed me: how you held me in your eyes A very powerful expression which triggers familiarity. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully expressed, Lady! |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Lady in white, I hate to echo other people but what other word can I say but beautiful very beautiful indeed. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
in this life having stood on eternity’s shoulder neither the graveled feel nor the cloak of dust clinging to my soul’s sole is closer than my reverie, as I still reach for you ========================= A very beautiful write with so many lines to contemplate and many images to envision.... I loved it..... Thank you ************************ "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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