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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-08-22 11:04 PM


lips locked
lover's lust
trying to take
trying to trust
eyes engulf
every emotion
playfully prolonging
passion's potion



[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-22-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-22 11:17 PM


SmittenKitten~
Delightfully rendered.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-08-22 11:22 PM


Very sensual...very good! Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2001-08-23 08:43 AM


nicely done... in a few words capturing the essence of passion....

I enjoyed!!

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2001-08-28 02:47 PM



SmittenKitten-
   Much enjoyed this!
   Nicely penned!

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



shadow974
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5 posted 2001-08-28 03:09 PM


Well done, very sensual.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-08-28 05:14 PM


Nice writing Smitten...James
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