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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-08-22 06:44 PM



Comfort me tonight
share your warmth
recount the many ways
I am loved until
my empty places are
filled,
promise that we
will not fail
& I promise that
I shall believe,
always believe...


~Tier
8/01

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-08-22 06:48 PM


mmmm...now this read quite lovely...was like falling into a huge comfy bed with freshly laundered sheets! A "hug" of a poem, Tiers.  
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2 posted 2001-08-22 06:57 PM


Hey RT... good to see you again... always is... Your words as usual are wonderful. They paint the image so clearly and the feelings come through so well... you are an artist my dear friend...and one I truly enjoy reading...

don't be a stranger... visit us more often


RMW
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3 posted 2001-08-22 07:07 PM


Thata girl, RT. Bob
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4 posted 2001-08-22 07:12 PM


Never stop believing, never. Well done Tiers, well done indeed!

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Duncan
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5 posted 2001-08-23 12:27 PM


'If'ey promises but ones we so often need.  I enjoy your writing style alot.
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6 posted 2001-08-23 12:05 PM


that belief is all that we need Tier. . . hold on to it. . . and never let it go. . . because as you believe. . . so too do others. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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