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Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-08-22 03:26 PM

There's more behind the tears I cry
No one knows the truth
I hold this secret close to my heart
No one has a clue
My tender heart though still beats on
Is ravaged by the pain
I step outside to glimpse the sun
Yet all I see is rain
Its hard to live on hope at times
Too long I've had to pay
For years to come I'll pay much more
You took your love away

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-08-22 03:30 PM

Sadly and well done

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Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2001-08-23 12:51 PM

Wow! This was very well written! I could feel it, maybe cause I have felt it before.

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-08-23 12:53 PM

it sucks for sure I must admit no one loved me till my wife so I dont know but man I can feel your pain

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-08-23 10:33 AM

There's more behind the tears I cry
No one knows the truth
I hold this secret close to my heart
No one has a clue
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Painful......I'm sure many can relate to this as I did......

Thank you
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-08-23 11:25 AM

and yet...if we could only open, we'd likely learn to see
that others have experienced pains and joys
just the same as we

well written sadness/pain

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-26 12:10 PM

what we hide from those is what most pains us. . .

you've shown that well. . . excellent work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-08-26 01:51 PM

Nice expression...James

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-08-26 09:51 PM

This was such a heartfelt piece of writing that was also so very sad. I hope a special love comes your way. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2001-08-26 09:59 PM

Very sad but truthful.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

ramrog
Member

since 2001-08-22

Posts 50

10 posted 2001-08-27 01:31 AM

I really liked it. expressed well.

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

11 posted 2001-08-28 10:37 PM

Feeling displayed in technical brevity. My my my. I like stumbling across a poem that flows so nicely.

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