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Magical Moment
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Magical Moment |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Magical Moment The dusk brings a sense of beginning and end When sky’s reds and purples and aureates blend In silence the heavens announcing that this Is the day’s final moment of glory and bliss The earth and the season have somehow produced The timing of swallows to gather and roost A signal for crickets to fiddle a tune When bat silhouettes flap across silver moon I sit and observe evening’s drama unfold Though there’s no final peace in all I behold Til the moon rises up in a soft globe of white And little stars come out to cover my night Elizabeth Santos 8/22/01 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ this is so soft and gorgeous!  I like the way this made me feel |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This just "falls" down the page...well done, Lady Santos... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Liz, I was just discussing your work with a fellow "pipper" yesterday, and this is a great example of what we both agreed upon--you should be published! Reading your work is akin to going to the best restaurant in town! You never disappoint. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Another masterpiece. Deju Vu all over again |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
elizabeth, wonderful writing! |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Absolutly WONDERFUL! What else is there to say? Kris |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you so much for your generous comments, Serenity, you warm my heart Thanks you Liz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes this is like the best restaurant in town alright, and I hope htat it never closes its doors to us either. I loved this soft piece Liz. ~*Homepage*~ http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/722155 |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This is wonderful...it brought the most vivid images to my mind. Best |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Mysteria, you are so sweet Best, I appreciate you comments, Thank you Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I have a strange sense of connection with this piece at the moment...  I like it Liz - Very nicely done..  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The faces of tomorrow are always there to touch us through a curtain of promise and you pen the peace and elegance more beautifully than most can even think of. So exquisite is your pen and your talent for sharing the marvels of life with us. Superb penning as always. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Magical Moment when you touched my soul with your words.......excellent as always. Charisma |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, Yes, I guess you've seen a lot of stars lately through the skykight of your tent. THat's great way to view the heavens Mark, you are so generous with your comments. Thank you so much for your very kind remarks Charisma, What a sweet thing to say Thank yoou Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ I liked the quiet beauty in this piece~ 'The earth and the season have somehow produced The timing of swallows to gather and roost A signal for crickets to fiddle a tune When bat silhouettes flap across silver moon' You make the 'magic' happen~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely Magical Moment, Elizabeth! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Magical indeed ... this is just lovely Elizabeth! Beautiful imagery and visuals, much enjoyed this delightful piece my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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