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Love's Valley
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Love's Valley |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Love’s Valley stippled point dipped in trusted bleed of red scripted prose of voice, wending thoughts that bled emotions placed upon the vellumed page scarce one sees thus anger’s war both have waged clinging to furies that still crest in thee as only fools mock their own parody ‘twould one seek then a higher form of light to cast aside darkness that binds so tight wail not against that which you’ve cast aside but take up again love there by your side it awaits but a glance of your desire embers still glow, should you fan its fires you seek in vain of that which will expire what love, silenced, would have lifted higher [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
expire not sweet love trusted above all others you make my heart beat |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WONDERFUL!!!! You did a sonnet!! I like these very much.  this one is fantastic "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is wonderfully done. . . not knowing sonnets so well, I don't feel that I can offer any pointers. . . but perhaps you could send me a few. . . well done my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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