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It's In The Presentation (My First Haiku)
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It's In The Presentation (My First Haiku) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Winsome doves bring song To the goldenrod of life Weeds have beauty too I'm still trying!  This is nature/philosophy maybe. I hope it still qualifies. Thanks for the inspiration![This message has been edited by rwood (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Well I don't know much about different forms of poetry but this is beaufully done and so true. Like wild flowers are they just weeds? Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Within the morning a coo breaks the dawn of time as doves kiss the day *************** Yeppers, that is a Haiku alright. Well done indeed. Great subject too. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yeahhhhh! I did it, I did it. Go Haiku, Go Haiku! I'm dancin, Go Haiku! Little things are big accomplishments too.Shadow: Thanks for reading! Botanically speaking yes, everyday eyes of the beholder (like me) no. Wildflowers are the volunteers of beauty in a otherwise open field of brambles. Thanks so much! Mark: Many thanks! The words complimented beautifully! Sincerely, Regina [This message has been edited by rwood (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yeaaaaa!!! that's haiku alright  and I love it  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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