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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-20 02:39 PM

Currents

curtains,
sheer in the
delicate of
their lace,
casting shadows
on your face,
I see your
reach,
feeling the
breach of what
I cannot
understand
but all I know
is that I want
to have the
hold of your
hand
in
mine...

breaching...

the call of one to one
in waters deep, love’s
begun to break the swale
in rippled echo from whale to whale

aching
is this inner
fire
knowing not
what would
quench
desires
unnamed...

breaching...

I would pass
beyond that curtained
veil
if I thought you
would hail me in….

the call of one to one
in waters deep, love’s
begun to break the swale
echoes sing from whale to whale

perhaps it is
just nature’s tide
warm emotions
that I ride
or mayhap the
salted air
that tells me
I should dare

but curtained back
beyond refrain
is the call
of your name

calling of one to one
in waters deep, love’s begun
to break across the swale
as the she calls to the male

~*~

Photo of whale, breaching, courtesy of NOAA Central Library

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-08-20 02:46 PM

Wonderful piece! Such feeling. How could any male let this call go unheeded?
Fabulous write!

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-08-20 02:51 PM

Beautiful call! wonderful write..thanks for sharing!
Cindi

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-20 02:58 PM

wonderful images and feeling in this...

a beautiful write...

thanks for sharing it with us...
it is...

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

4 posted 2001-08-20 03:13 PM

but all I know
is that I want
to have the
hold of your
hand
in
mine...

the whole thing is incredible, but I just love that....it is so hard to explain, that feeling of holding hands, but the way you put it, it need not be explained, it just is.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-08-20 03:16 PM

Ahhh, Lady, what a fantastic write..wonderful imagery and the feelings swirling..ahh, very good...very gentle smile

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-08-20 03:36 PM

this IS stunning...just beautiful...took my breath away...i'll read & reread this one (can you you tell i liked it ALOT)...it is wonderful... helen

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2001-08-20 04:27 PM

Lady,

You had to know that I'd love this one and I do. Such a tranquil call...Thanks!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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