Open Poetry #15 |
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don't you wanna take a ride with me? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
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Come on up wanna take a ride with me? Yes you. (I write in a sexy smile) I saw you giving me the eye. (oh my oh my) Am I delighted to have chanced this way today. The afternoon is looking good.... I am in control with young and handsome written in for the duration; imagination is running at breakneck speed (I like it fast). Wrap yourself around me (I write) and hang on tight you are in for the ride of your life. My fingers fly as we round curve after curve laughter reins free as we scream More more more…. But suddenly I am more than aware of your body pressed against mine. (whew it sure is hot in here) Wait where were we going? I seem to have lost track of the road it doesn’t seem to matter any more as your hands are roaming curves on their own (I don’t remember writing this….) ...the scent of you, right here behind your ear, the taste of your neck pure exquisite. My fingers explore and oh I do adore your lack of attire. (her blouse I let fly) I have made my way mi hermosa, to your belt made of snake mmmmm what I would do to you, if you would just apply the brake. ...no wait, hold up... Pull up I tell you, give the keyboard back to me. (when did I say that you could type?) You really can't take me seriously, (I have to be home by 5:00) This is just a poem and we are very near the end. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
( smiling) I liked this.. for several reasons... it is serious but doesn't seem to take itself too seriously... and it is quite an image you paint... lets say it moved me... Nicely done!! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you...lol...this one was fun to write...and yeppers I could use some of this kind of fun....writing that is *g* |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Shame on your keyboard ![]() ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Isn't it great to write poetry you can have fun with? ![]() ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If this didn't really happen it should...James |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
lol, yep it is, I wasn't sure I could pull this off, but am really glad you all enjoyed ![]() |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is brilliantly funny. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you....I needed this tonight. I love it. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is too funny...jb...you are so talented...helen |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i wrote bout jellybeans in the teen poetry cus jellybeans are yummy no not this person silly what were you thinking? robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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