don't you wanna take a ride with me?

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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2001-08-20 12:08 PM

Come on up
wanna take a ride with me?
Yes you. (I write in a sexy smile)
I saw you
giving me the eye.
(oh my oh my)
Am I delighted
to have chanced this way
today.

The afternoon is looking good....
I am in control
with young and handsome
written in for the duration;
imagination is running
at breakneck speed
(I like it fast).

Wrap yourself around me
(I write)
and hang on tight
you are in for
the ride
of your life.

My fingers fly as we
round curve after curve
laughter reins free
as we scream
More more more….
But suddenly I am more than aware
of your body pressed
against mine.
(whew it sure is hot in here)

Wait where were we going?
I seem to have lost track
of the road
it doesn’t seem to matter any more
as your hands are roaming
curves on their own
(I don’t remember
writing this….)

...the scent of you, right here
behind your ear,
the taste of your neck
pure exquisite.
My fingers explore
and oh I do adore
your lack of attire.
(her blouse I let fly)
I have made my way
mi hermosa, to your belt
made of snake
mmmmm what I would do
to you, if you would just
apply the brake.

...no
wait,
hold up...
Pull up I tell you,
give the keyboard back to me.
(when did I say that you
could type?)

You really
can't take me
seriously,
(I have to be home by 5:00)
This is
just a poem
and we are very near

the end.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 08-20-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-20 12:10 PM

( smiling) I liked this.. for several reasons... it is serious but doesn't seem to take itself too seriously... and it is quite an image you paint... lets say it moved me...

Nicely done!!

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2001-08-20 03:51 PM

thank you...lol...this one was fun to write...and yeppers I could use some of this kind of fun....writing that is *g*

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-20 04:32 PM

Shame on your keyboard

I loved this roller coaster ride of emotion very much. I might be inspired to write some seriously romantic work due to your wonderful piece

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-08-20 06:55 PM

Isn't it great to write poetry you can have fun with?

This is very clever....nicely done!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-08-20 09:37 PM

If this didn't really happen it should...James

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

6 posted 2001-08-21 02:04 PM

lol, yep it is, I wasn't sure I could pull this off, but am really glad you all enjoyed

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-08-21 10:45 PM

This is brilliantly funny.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-08-21 10:50 PM

Thank you....I needed this tonight. I love it.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2001-08-21 10:57 PM

this is too funny...jb...you are so talented...helen

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

10 posted 2001-08-23 03:03 AM

i wrote bout jellybeans in the teen poetry cus jellybeans are yummy no not this person silly what were you thinking?
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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