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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-19 10:25 PM


From nature's beautiful tapestry
we have painted our own masterpiece
displaying our love on canvas
Two lovers walking barefoot
along the golden sand
under the brilliant blue sky

We have painted our picture with
such intensity and passion
from our palette of many colors
You kiss me by the waters edge
and whisper words of love
which is music to my ears
Your tender touch on my skin
awakens feelings from deep within

I return your warm passionate kiss
which I fill with my want and desire
sending it directly
to the door of your heart

As the day nears its end
we repaint the sky with
shades of azure and pink
and edge it with gold
We add some seagulls as they
fly towards the horizon
in search of the setting sun

On our final canvas we paint
a moonlit night reserved for lovers
as their passions and desires
unfold beneath the seductive
light of the moon

Two star-crossed lovers
with eyes only for one another
arms entwined
passions ignited
surrendering to love
climbing the highest peak of desire
as they reach the summit of love

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-20 01:55 AM


Sue ~ love suits you as you paint with such vivid colors, this was charming and so romantic.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
   ~* Mysteria *~

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2 posted 2001-08-20 07:11 AM


SueTang~
It's lovely enough to be framed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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