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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-17 12:10 PM

When?

I wish I could
feel whole again
I keep asking myself
when, when, when
see hope
but can grasp at none
another war lost
before the battle’s done
wish you could
hear my fear
but emptiness
is so hard to hear
and how is it
I could ever explain
that my heart
is just broken
and I don’t think
I’ll ever be the same

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-08-17 12:27 PM

There is always a light at the end of the tunnel.....

I hope you would see it and grasp it soon.....

A touching well-done write....

Thank you
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-17 01:00 PM

soon my friend. . . there's always a way. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

3 posted 2001-08-17 10:08 PM

this is a little sad, I know you'll find this "whole" again...God bless

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2001-08-18 01:16 AM

i like this A LOT! very real. dont look and youll find it. very well written!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-08-18 02:19 AM

another war lost
before the battle’s done

Powerful writing.

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

6 posted 2001-08-18 09:49 AM

Soon.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-08-18 04:42 PM

enjoy

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2001-08-19 10:48 AM

This is so sad....
I have felt this same way befor too
Beautiful write...
Life will work out just the way its suposed to Helen, no matter what.....

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

9 posted 2001-08-19 03:16 PM

Dear Lady'
You should know by now that you will never be the same as you were. You will always be more.

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

10 posted 2001-08-19 03:22 PM

Sad but as you can see many of us identify with what you are saying. Move forward
Nicely written poem

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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