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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Careening ~*Marge Tindal*~ She stirred the wind with her want transparent even to those who thought they felt her caress Careless surrender to tumultuous need careening her hills of desire Then in the taking it fell quickly away She stilled the wind~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
If ever there was a word for the feeling you have so perfectly written...your title has captured it. [This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...this is beautiful...helen |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
beautifully soft...I really enjoyed this! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Marge. Marge, this is the best poem I have seen come from your pen in a long time...you write so many beautiful ones, and touching ones, cute and silly... but this one, stands above the rest... and it touched me in several ways... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Good stuff indeed - "She stilled the wind".. I like it - Great line, great poem...Don't ever stop writing, Marge..  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh my Margie gal you have penned yet another perfect piece of writing, your pen truly is most devine...wonderful write my friend ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, oh sister of my heart this is utterly utterly first class. Always you manage to capture 'the moment' 'the feeling' absolutely fabulous darling girl. My Margie girl long may you write wonder and dreams. Fabulous as always Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Why, thank you very much. OneSlickLady~ Thanks so much, hon. Cottage~ I appreciate that ! LadyInWhite~ Well ... I'm not even sure where it came from~ A new muse has been tip-toeing around~ Perhaps she'll return~ Thank you. Nan~ Gosh, thanks ! Like I would know how to quit ! They work me ... they really work me. And I love it too much to even think of stopping ! Tracie~ Thanks bunches, sweetie~ Marsha~ And you come riding in on a smile, lovie~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Indeed a quietly beautiful write, Marge...I really like this...hope that 'muse' comes around again, too! sp  can I see my world without you in it? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Thanks ... that makes at least two of us~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Well, ya know what?! I think I LOVE this new little muse of yours.  This is wonderful! "transparent" "She stilled the wind~" These two lines could just about stand on their own. Love it!  Can't wait to see what she comes up with next. Love ya, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Thanks little friend~ I do believe that Ayrasela intends to keep me busy~ She has taken me quite by surprise~ I'm glad to share her thoughts with you~ Love  n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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