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Open Poetry #15

Homes Of The Heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-16 11:57 PM

There were no pots of gold
at the end of my rainbows
no romantic moonlit nights
no shooting stars
no serenades of love
no special someone

But then you entered my life
and made yourself at home
within my heart and captured my soul

Soon my rainbows were brighter
than ever before
we walked hand in hand beneath
a star studded sky
we made a wish
on our own shooting star
and you serenaded me in front
of the roaring fire

Finally we had found comfort
and warmth in the homes
of one anothers hearts

Suetang

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-08-17 12:55 PM

Oh Sue, is that where "home is where the heart is" came from, oh well I would like to think so. This was lovely.

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
~* Mysteria *~

shadow of the fall
Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

2 posted 2001-08-17 11:43 AM

and this is the way it should be, makes me want to smile!

Karen

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-17 11:45 AM

nicely done... and noce thoughts..

I enjoyed

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-08-17 01:02 PM

that's what happens. . . and when it does. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-08-17 04:06 PM

Beautiful story of love, Sue...I truly enjoyed this!

sp

can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

6 posted 2001-08-17 10:04 PM

sue, each time I read your poem, I thot', just how well u know about love!! I enjoy your every piece

love, cottage

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-08-19 01:03 AM

Thank you one and all for your lovely words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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