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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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Autumn Lovers by Michael Auguste As autumn paints with many hues and chill, as leaf piles waft their smoke to nostrils scent, the onset of fall breathes once again another year almost faded. And often against this palette of many colors love is found. Two young lovers can be seen walking hand in hand, their cheeks blushed with life and inner warmth. Their focus, not on the landscape as it catches the fire of turning season, but upon each other While sunset's silken glow bathes them in crimson radiance, broken whispers can be heard. Warm breaths of steam melt into the falling day as lips touch, taste, know and linger Michael Auguste~ There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in. [This message has been edited by Auguste (edited 08-16-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Their focus, not on the landscape as it catches the fire of turning season, but upon each other While sunset's silken glow bathes them in crimson radiance, broken whispers can be heard. Warm breaths of steam melt into the falling day as lips touch, taste, know and linger ======================== falling of many kinds here  Michael this is lovely... we all seem to have autumn on our minds... you created many images and moods with a few perfectly chosen verses. very well done poet sir and nice to see your name back here jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
I really like this poem. Autumn is my favorite season; you've described colors and scents very well. And the young love. Wish that would happen for me! Kudos, ShannonM |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YOU HAVE BEEN MISSED MY FRIEND...and how you make me yearn for Autumn breezes (it'll be awhile before we see any of THAT here) You write of love as one who KNOWS--and that is an Autumn breeze in itself. Hugs. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is good...good good good.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--Love in Autumn does sound wonderful. I think I'll try it!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good to see you back and this is my favorite season of the year. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicel poem..and nicely painted images... I enjoyed |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Autumn Lovers experiencing love when the world is renewed....my view anyway...") beautiful as always... Lauren Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so very beautiful Michael. We are witnessing the beginnings of Spring here in Melbourne, my beautiful freesias and daffodils are out and there are signs of new life everywhere. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelA~ Nicely done. 'the landscape as it catches the fire of turning season' Enjoyed the imagery you captured here~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michael, what lovely pictures you paint for us yet again. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Their focus, not on the landscape as it catches the fire of turning season, but upon each other" Such beautiful imagery and phrasing you've captured within this romantic and delicate piece Michael ... just lovely, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Michael, I love this, you capture the magic of Autumn and a lover's rendezvous so well  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my sweet friend you have painted for me my favorite time of the year it is a begining, a renewal time for me not a fading I loved this and I'm keeping it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A tender write...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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