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Sullen Wave
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Sullen Wave |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212
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Sullen Wave Anonymous silk without color learning her blush in the wiles of her lover's tongue She came to me at his passing rouged with sullen wave in the call of lonesome winds billowing sadness conjured by a spell of river long tears And all I could do was pass the torch my zeal for color long departed black robed and far removed from the rainbow's arching Willie ©2001 |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is hardly anonymous in the silken touch it leaves behind... well done, Sir... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Anonymous silk without color learning her blush in the wiles of her lover's tongue She came to me at his passing rouged with sullen wave now.. iwish I had written this... wonderful!! |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Very nice. This reminds me of many things...darkly magical... ShannonM |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Willie, both sad and beautifully written shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW..this is awesome... amazing imagery and emote... so few perfectly chosen words create this intense, mystic scene and essence... very very cool poem!!! well done poet sir jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WRBreezin~ My stars ! I like what you do with words~ Nicely portrayed, poet~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Thanks to one, and all!! Your replies are just great! Willie |
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