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Momentarily (by walker and JLR)
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Momentarily (by walker and JLR) |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Momentarily The morning shows potential beautiful, cloudless boundless like your love sunrays dry the morning dew I smile as I see the sky Momentarily it's promise is enough radiant, clear uncomplicated like our love noonday suns the afternoon essence I relax in the warmth Momentarily comfortable in reality fresh, light easy as our bodies dance of love moon’s shadow in the night breeze I delight in your touch Momentarily |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
But life is made up of moments...one after the other...and its THIS moment that you have to live for...THIS one...too many people seem to think you shouldnt live for the moment...but tell me...who has tomorrow? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is wonderful you two... softly sensual with anticpation and the imagery is a lovely as the emotions you write very well together hope to see more take care jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely work, JLR & Walker! *smiles* ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
the messages between the "momentarily's" are lovely and promising, yet the momentarily's give a tentativeness here that lends and element of fear of lack of confidence...perhaps that's the alertness one needs always have so they do not take the moments and their emotions or promises for granted---lovely |
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pure_innocence Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 80Colorado, US |
And these are the moments I will cherish all my life. . . It is a lucky one that shares these moments with you that you write of so beautifully. |
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