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Healing Waters
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Healing Waters |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
He haunts the shadows of my dreams This lover that I need, my heart to tame Waking me with thoughts of eternity With gentle whispers of my name He strolls the corridors of my heart Picking up the pieces burst askew One by one placing them abreast Shaping the ornaments of love anew Softly, tenderly miracles in hope Speaking of tomorrows without doubts Framing a future painted with petals A longing is born amid protestant shouts Struggling to regain love’s adulation Healing the parts with simple devotion |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is wonderful...I kept reading it over and over, I love it Cindi |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... an enjoyable read and very nice imagery... good stuff! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . .this is well done my friend. . . a wonderful picture. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Awwww sweet Dulcy....Love DOES heal! Told ya so! *wink* Mmmmm like the idea that the pieces of the old love, are fashioned into positive symbols of love again. Wonderous wording, with an obvious heartfelt telling of the heart. *s* Your friend is a lucky fellow....awwww SR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dulcinea~ I sure like this thought~ 'He strolls the corridors of my heart' *deep sighs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Cindi~~thank you so much...I am glad you could see the healing in it.  Cpat Hair~~your kind comments touch my heart..thank you~ Sven~~ah..how sweet you are, thank you! You are so kind. SR~~yes...you told me~ (blushing)...thank you for your encouragement and support you are a dear! ((((HUGZ)))) Marge~~thank you! I am so glad this touched you...love can be so wonderful when it is right...*sighing too* Thanks again! |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Struggling to regain love’s adulation Healing the parts with simple devotion beautiful. shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a perfect title for this cadence kissed gem. wonderful writing!! Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Citizenx~~thank you so much! JanetMarie~~such a lovely poetic reply, you honor me! |
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