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Dawn & Sunset (Now a Pair)
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Dawn & Sunset (Now a Pair) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Repost/Revise from Open #7 Dawn Sunset First light Last light New day comes New night begins Bringing joy and delight Delicate promise of flight Sun Moon Streaks through Shines through Rays of warmth Rays of crystal Covering me and you Showering with diamonds you Kiss Kiss Open arms Finding lips Here with you Hands find skin Safe from all harm Under soft warm fingertips Love Passion Gentle touch Love's wonder Holding your heart Falling deep down This means so much Your spell I'm under ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is beautiful! I like how you brought the two together I love it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
These are all very nice Sven...thank you for the repost so I could have the chance to see them. *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Darn....this is so very special.... |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
nice theme, sounds too good to be true  Karen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
wow, this is great, I like the design too, and the words are so lovely. Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cindi, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Dulcinea, you're welcome. . . and thank you for reading. . . Lady, thank you my friend. . . shadow, thank you. . . it's true. . . always is. . . Sandra, thank you my friend. . . I've always loved these two times of day. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Sven This was so well written with such wonderful imagery. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow...... A lovely...lovely contrast.....and interpretation..... I'm glad you gave me the chance to see it by posting it again..... Thank you..... ************************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
Sven; almost missed this; glad I changed my page to see 200. you truely have a gift. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
What a romantic piece....I love them as a pair, they contrast each other well ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very very romantic and lovely piece....love this pair. Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write,my friend |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sue, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Enchanted Melody, thank you for reading my friend. . . wpwpoet, I'm glad that you didn't miss this either. . .thank you. . . Krista, I can't remember which one I wrote first, but have always wanted to put them together. . . thank you. . . Charisma, thank you as always my friend. . . vandana, always good to see you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
nice touch and a different format, very unusual and soft. Karen |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you have the soul of an artist & the heart of a romantic...helen |
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KaziaRose Junior Member
since 2001-08-18
Posts 14Australia |
Sven What a wonderful write, most enjoyable indeed. Loved it ~Kaz~ A mellifluous muse lies within this poet |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely thought... great balance.. wonderful job. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh gr8 bard of the North, you have touched our senses once again. I guess you can tell I loved your work. MORE! |
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