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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-15 12:50 PM



Rounding the Circle

forever lost
within your link
steps in chime
danced to sync
star lit floor
of moon glow
magic time
morning glories grow
we round the circle
of time
know the sad
and happiness sublime
it is the degree
of  a 360 soul
alone half
together whole

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-15 01:08 PM


wow, this flows so great   I liked this very much  
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2 posted 2001-08-15 01:08 PM


I'm always trying to go full circle too!
But I never know when I'm half there.
Good poem.

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3 posted 2001-08-15 01:19 PM


yes nice flow and it too... goes the 360....

I enjoyed

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4 posted 2001-08-18 02:55 AM


OneSlickLady~
Bringing us back to where we've been
Circles of the heart ... I like, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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