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Nothing Happened Wrong...
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Nothing Happened Wrong... |
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moongoddess New Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 4PA, USA |
looking through a no ones eyes i see no ones reflection no worries no fears yet all i wake to is red numbers, 3:00am, a cold sweat, all worries, all fears. cat eyes and bite marks on necks and hips, dirty floors and shut tight doors, ceiling spots and a loaded 22, "friends" playing video games, and a kiss like nothing happened wrong... she went to the bay and she's never coming back. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite visual you paint with this.... nicely done! The feelings of being lost and not quite owning even yourself are strong... enjoying your writes...look forward to see how and what else you decide to show us of yourself. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
well, this kind of gave me chills. Nice job, fellow moon-lover Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down) |
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