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Fandango
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Fandango |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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you tilt back lips hungry, parted, tongue in lack. Eyes in glare bold in stare you lean forward I tilt back. as you retreat hips in thrust frustration's greet... one step forward two steps back Now I must I arch my back. castanet Longing lingers-- pant of breast... Tiny droplets, beads of sweat gathering upon the lips All of longing yet unmet hunger in a sway of hips... as you are there opposing shores curse ocean air-- a chasm in a river's flow-- tortured dance of Fandango. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You go girl!!!!!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a sensually tortured.... ( chuckling) hey I don't dance..and you made me want to try... As usual... I enjoyed |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
Now, this is the kind of thing I could use right now, nice touch and great images, I could almost hear the tapping of their shoes!  Karen Gunther |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks, and um, CH? I don't dance either.  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You may not dance, but you certainly know how to click those castanets... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WELL WELL WELL very nice , very stimulating, me Sista. Loved the images that shot through my mind as I read this. O and NOW I am able to hear your voice as I read your Wonderful poetry. I am excited! *greatbigsmiles* Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hear the orchestra starting up. . . love it my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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