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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-07-14 11:00 AM

Out
Virginia Salter

Out
to enjoy music, sunshine,
a lovely evening
...it happens
one of your favorite songs
begins
fills the air
wafts on the breeze

....tenderness
gently caresses my heart
delicately reminds me
you’re gone
you’re not here
to hear, with me
not here to smile
ear to ear
with joy
that he’s singing your song

is it possible
your heaven is filled
with all the things
you loved?
may it be so.

© July 25, 2000

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2001-07-14 11:16 AM

I am sure that heaven holds still your heart and your love, but we are all here for you and happy to listen to the music of your heart and the magic of your poetry.

Nice piece of work.

Rick

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-07-14 11:18 AM

The heaven I believe in, holds all this and more, expecially your tenderness is always there...very gentle smile

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-14 11:39 AM

thank you both for your tender words and gentle encouragement

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-07-14 04:08 PM

I believe heaven is filled with the very essence of love...James

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

5 posted 2001-07-14 04:35 PM

I dare not dream of what heaven may hold, I'm still trying to find my way out of this damn handbasket I'm in

In all seriousness I loved your poem, beautiful words, sincere thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-07-14 04:56 PM

The power of music may be second only to that of Love, but when you combine the two of them, and add some words for flavoring and a touch of memories -- then you have a recipe for soul-food. I can relate to your sentiments here, Virginia, though under different circumstances.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

7 posted 2001-07-14 05:02 PM

I'll bet the angels are singing your tune because love is something that stirs even the highest in our lifes.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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