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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-14 10:55 PM


I go out of my way in the hope that
I may catch just a glimpse of you
Will you be on my train this morning
as I glance over the top
of my romantic novel
or will you pass me in the street
as we cross at the intersection

Maybe you'll be sitting on the  
park bench opposite me as I
feed the pigeons in the park
Didn't I see you last weekend as you
were surfing on the crest of the waves
under the warm golden sun
while I sat on the beach
looking out to sea

I'm sure I'll see you at the party
where I'll be tonight
You'll be the handsome young man
chatting to the beautiful blonde
with the stunning figure
as I watch you from where I sit
- alone in the corner

Unfortunately for me and my
vivid imagination you don't
even know I exist
So I'll just continue to live
inside my fantasy world
where I know you'll be

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-14 11:15 PM


That's certainly one option.  Well written verse.
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-08-14 11:59 PM


Hey, if it's a fantasy world then he ought to be approachable no? Dream on.
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-15 09:10 AM


I thought I saw you staring at me... ( chuckling)

Nice work Sue... and dreams are for dreaming just as life is for living..the magic happens when the two meet and exist in the same place..at the same instance

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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4 posted 2001-08-16 10:06 AM



Enjoyed this very much!

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