Open Poetry #15 |
Glimpses Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I go out of my way in the hope that I may catch just a glimpse of you Will you be on my train this morning as I glance over the top of my romantic novel or will you pass me in the street as we cross at the intersection Maybe you'll be sitting on the park bench opposite me as I feed the pigeons in the park Didn't I see you last weekend as you were surfing on the crest of the waves under the warm golden sun while I sat on the beach looking out to sea I'm sure I'll see you at the party where I'll be tonight You'll be the handsome young man chatting to the beautiful blonde with the stunning figure as I watch you from where I sit - alone in the corner Unfortunately for me and my vivid imagination you don't even know I exist So I'll just continue to live inside my fantasy world where I know you'll be Suetang |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
That's certainly one option. Well written verse. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Hey, if it's a fantasy world then he ought to be approachable no? Dream on. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I thought I saw you staring at me... ( chuckling) Nice work Sue... and dreams are for dreaming just as life is for living..the magic happens when the two meet and exist in the same place..at the same instance |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Enjoyed this very much! |
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