Clinging to the Past ( inspired by Enchanted's Violet, Thank You Enchanted!)

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Open Poetry #15

Clinging to the Past ( inspired by Enchanted's Violet, Thank You Enchanted!)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-14 05:05 PM

Tensioned tendril wrapped
Each
Clinging solid choked
No breath to fall
Between
Leaves or stem so long
Left unpruned,
Uncared

Spiraled stealth sleeping
Each
Higher climb blocking
Locking here
Knowing
Without seeing creeping
Or tightly tendril wrapped
Past

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-14-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-14 05:13 PM

This reminds me so very much of a morning glory's tenacious wrap....and is as delicate as the same....

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

2 posted 2001-08-14 05:19 PM

wonderful read

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-14 05:45 PM

CPatHair~
A nicely composed inspiration~
I remain - ~*AShrinkingViolet*~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-08-14 07:03 PM

A lovely piece Ron.......quite wonderful.

I'm thankful for my old dusty poem that it brought out so much from you......

Thank you.....
************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 08-14-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-08-14 08:16 PM

Good one, I like the way you wove this.
Sandra

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