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...Pinpricks... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
a rumbling came, thundering intent thought it'd break my resolve but no 'tis you I have waited pins and needles tell me still, so quiet hardly breathing looking around spare white walls covered in pointillist perfection I know you as you heard sepia tones canvas remaining taut, only hoping that the brush would soon dip before the paint dries inspired by the Captain... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely.... I see pointillist made it into your poem..and the tension you spoke of in reply to mine... always nice to see how spring boarding off anothers changes or follow the feel of the first... Good work!!! I enjoyed a great deal!! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, my son makes his living with his paints and sculptures. and I have seen that feeling in him, the wait, then the frenzied actions before it leaves...ahh, gentle poets all, do we not do the same with our words? loved this write, oh gentle one..very gentle smile |
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