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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Waterproofed A life still under plastic, everything for sale. Waterproofed, tear-stained bits of me in fine detail. A still life under plastic, downpours, soaking thoughts. Every piece, a memory made of happiness, now lost. Bits of me, with bits of you combine to treasure hold. Someday mine, beheld in yours again becomes true gold. ~Wynter *it's hard to sell bits of your life.... "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
A spell of longing from the wand of your pen...endearing work. Willie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Not 'hard' ... darned near impossible~ It sounds very sad ... so I'm sure it is~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Willie... greatly appreciate your comments ~Wynter |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
to see your most treasured items going on the auction block..or to not know how much or what to value a piece of your life so that you can hold onto what's left...not a fun thing to do, Marge...and after awhile it looks like a collection of "junk" and you wonder...was this my life...thank you *s huggsssss ~Wynter |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
painful...and extremely hard to let go of the things that we have valued...for what ever reason... nicely written...and my sympathy for the experience it was written about... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully expressed and I related to it tremendously at this point. Thanks for this one. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
this must have been a hard one to write. Take care hon. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cpat, walker and Shadow of the fall... thank you for your caring remarks. It is hard to detach yourself and sell some belongings. Mostly collections that took years to accumulate and were reminders of travels and good times. But they are the easiest to sell to others..and like some friends have said..they will go to others and become their treasured items... hugssss Maureen (~Wynter) |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I understand - Been there - Done that... It's not easy, but look at it as making room for more?... Nicely written, Wynter..  |
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