Open Poetry #15 |
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Love Within My Heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
Do you miss me as much as I miss you Does your heart expand with love whenever we are together and do your feet sometimes leave the ground whenever I speak your name? Will our love for each other always remain in our hearts or will I simply fade from view an image of yesterday a passing memory a small window in the frame of your mind Memories of you are firmly entrenched within my heart - cast in stone Your image is so very vivid and you are never far from my thoughts My heart won't let you leave but if such a day were to come I hope I love you enough to let you go I would never want you to feel like a caged bird trapped with no chance of escape but one who freely takes wing and soars through the skies in search of a better place Suetang |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It does hurt sometimes, okay, all the time...but, nice expression of these feelings, Sue... sp ![]() can I see my world without you in it? |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The secret to love is giving that space and it is sometimes the hardest thing to do. This is a great poem as a reminder of that. Well done. To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, It's like you read my mind when you wrote these words. Very cool write! ![]() Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ I always enjoy your thoughts~ 'an image of yesterday a passing memory a small window in the frame of your mind' See ... this is refreshingly unique~ Thank you for sharing that thought~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Suetang- Wonderfully expressed emotion here. Enjoyed much. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your lovely comments on this piece, I'm forever grateful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, a question we all ask sometimes I guess. But you put it into words much better than I would ![]() Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
He would come back, for how could he forget you Sue. ![]() Sincerely, Regina |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely read.... and love can only truly exist in freedom... courage and faith in the knowledge it is shared..not forced "because" of something.... I enjoyed!! |
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