Open Poetry #15 |
Pelican Morn |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Pelican Morn it is a pelican morn the waves of life are safe and warm our dreams soar high in flight a carry over from the night and if by another our thoughts are read diving into their sea our hunger fed into a heart plunge so deep secret place where meeting spirits leap and as a pelican with it’s bill I’ll dive and dive till I’ve had my fill picture provided by Bernie Slicker "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I like this Also the picture... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ I remember my first encounter watching a Pelican~ What a funny and intriguing critter~ I enjoyed your piece with delightful remembering~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May you always feast, Helen. Nice write. All writing comes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I see a nice book in these H & B---would be lovely...already is, but what a legacy to leave to your kids too. My total admiration! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey Lady...caught me a fish the other day and he talked and talked all about you standing there in the waves under the pelican-do, and he said...ah, but you don't want to hear about that, you want to know what I think about this poem...this GREAT piece here. Well, I enjoyed it all three reads! Think I'll catch it again on the tide... don't git yer feet wet, me friend... jwesley |
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