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Not That Long Ago
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Not That Long Ago |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Not That Long Ago One day not that long ago I met a pretty girl I wished I could get to know. I found nothing so special about her that really caught my eye. She was an average girl and I was an average guy. I spent lots of time with her. We spent all our Sundays together. We shared feelings from our hearts and we shared lovely moments of pleasure. She was not a princess and I was not a prince still after a while I found her smile to be something I couldn't resist. Although I know a man gets not his every wish was I surprised when I found she had the sweetest lips I ever kissed. Jameslee@June14,2001 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"She was not a princess and I was not a prince still after a while I found her smile to be something I couldn't resist." Ah James ... no prince or princess titles required ... just a lovely smile to beguile. I enjoyed this.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
"the sweetest lips I ever kissed" Wonderful! the joy of the first kiss...I love this one! Thanks for sharing Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
something drew you to her, someday, maybe you will discover what it was I just thought of a line of a song "something in the way she moves" Maybe for you it's "something in the way she moves me"  enjoyed your poem |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, JamesMichael~ You always write the *kiss* with such delicious flavor !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful and sweet, well done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kit, Cindi, Vas, Marge and walker for the wonderful responses...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe that lovers become more beautiful to each other within the power of love...James |
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