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My Very Scent
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My Very Scent |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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My Very Scent I wear a little of you each day with me, near me there you stay down deep meshed my pores you’re in the touch and smell of my skin you, I do not need to constantly reapply a little is much in abundant supply so very near and present you are my very scent "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting..and an idea I like... very well done as usual... lovely write... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
essence of intimacy, enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is nice, it makes me think of a certain person who wore a certain cologne, and when I get a whiff of it, 20 years later, it makes me think of him. I know thats not what this was about, just babbling  Love the poem, and the intimacy within it. Sandra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely musing of the scent of a loved one...I do think you mean 'pores' not 'pours' though  sorry, it's the teacher in me...well maybeyou are 1 slick lady, I enjoy reading your stuff!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . I know this feeling. . . well done helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slippery_lady Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20Ohio, USA |
Nice Slickster, I like this. |
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