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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Because I knew even before you did, the kind of man you are inside behind the walls of self-defense I was not the least surprised to find you'd taken her in... I would expect no less from you and yes I knew before you even did, that whatever hands of Gods or Goddess or simple kindness of the fates would bring her home to the compassion that is you. She was homeless and you, a vacant house, and now I pray only that she take the shutters down and let the light stream in and when the sun shows the neglect of windows left unwashed for years, may she have the wisdom and the patience to wash the years of fears away and outside the window of your eyes she plant a garden worthy of you. (with love to my friend...be happy.) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful poem my friend...not only man/woman but you could problably publish it in CAT Magazine...it definitely fits the felines of both races.... jwesley |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
An allegory to appeal to the differing views of readers. Nicely done so that one can see what hits closest to their view. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual.. you grace us with insight and wisdom.. very well done...and as usual.. a pleasure to read the strong imaged lines and the heartfelt delivery... bravo! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Serenity I absolutely loved this one, into the library it went!  To see real beauty ~ close your eyes and listen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ VERY nice ! You touch me tender~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is just beautiful, serenity...I was captured by each line from beginning to end...wonderful write! sp  no power in creation, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
May she never be a piece of furniture and they both know what it takes to make a house a home. Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at you* beautiful in its sincerety and offering.  meWe're all feeding our lonely...like it might go away... |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
a unique and beautifully written poem, your warm heart radiates here. shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and I know that whoever she finds will know that touch of you. . . and the sprits shall find them again. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
j wesley....thank you my sweet....yer a doll. moonshadow...thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. CH---I'm shaking my head at this "insight and wisdom" thing although I thank you for your confidence in me...I once wrote a line in another poem you might enjoy: "I'd like to be an idiot-- certified and proud-- just so everyone would stop asking so many damned questions..." With a  atcha and gratitude...Mysteria...sorry I've neglected you my dear friend..will catch up on my e mail asp...sometimes tho...I just like to write. HUGS my Canadian sister. Marge...it makes me happy when I can write something positive that you enjoy--although not without sadness--this was indeed about wishing the best for everyone. So thank you. snowpants...you are another I read more than I reply to...I'll try to remedy that in the future, but please know that I admire your work as well. Thanks.RS--you astound me sometimes. That "piece of furniture line"? I have said so often, it makes me feel like you know me. Thank you for reading...and should you ever need an ear to hear, I'm here. JM...smiling back atchya...because I know YOU KNOW...do you know how much of a relief it is to have a friend that you don't have to explain a damned thing to? THANK YOU. cx? We shall chat again my friend...we have some unfinished poetry if I recall. Let me pick up some of the debris from this passing storm, and I shall be in touch. We ARE BUDS. Sven...and she? had better to be good to him--Or she WILL know that touch of me. Thanks all for reading. Every reply is a love pat!!! SMOOOCHES........ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
serenity, OOOOOOO I really like this one. I think it is one of my favorites that I've read from you   TaraB |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Serenity, And what a garden she has planted...Enchanting. Elise |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Four walls are hard to break but you seem to have seen inside that which was meant to be solid. Thank you, Rich |
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