The uncertainty of your love

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Open Poetry #15

The uncertainty of your love

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-12 05:35 PM

She asked
"Are you well, my daughter"
and I answered,
"Yes, Mom everything's fine"
She continue
questioning me,
she said I looked sick.
I left the room,
and looked in a mirrow
I looked happy
so I thought
My reflection
didn't show the
uncertainty of your love
Thought that I could fool the world
pretending things didn't hurt me
It was then I saw a tear
I wiped it off
and left the room
My mother knows me too well

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-08-12 07:14 PM

Mothers are like that aren't they? I enjoyed thinking about this.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-12 11:48 PM

My reflection
didn't show the
uncertainty of your love

Very well written, I liked these lines especially.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-08-13 04:58 AM

Yes I know of this uncertain part of love...James

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

4 posted 2001-08-13 05:15 AM

Perhaps we see what we wish... but effects of the heart and soul are often reflected in our eyes... for others, who are atuned, to see. A lovely poem... I enjoyed it immensely.

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