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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-08-12 08:40 AM

“RETURN TO THE PARK”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Did you take that walk, the other night like I mentioned,
to see them two critters, ‘fatootin’ in the park…
I hope that you did, for I told you in the first poem,
about them two, and what they did in the dark…

H’aaa you say, for you still don’t know what it is,
even the things that you saw, in the twilight…
But as sure as I’m writing this, I saw them two,
it was in that clearing, where the stars shine bright…

They were dancing and singing, and all of that stuff,
around that big fire, like so many times before…
Then they stopped, and started ‘fatootin’ over there,
and as many times, as they did it, they wanted more…

Darn, I could never figure it out either, so I’ll go back,
once more to figure out, what they were really doing…
When I do, I’ll write one more poem to explain this,
but I need to watch them again, when they start ‘fatootin’…
~~~~

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-08-12 05:08 PM

Bill, I'm wondering why they need the fire to dance around when all they are doing is 'fatoonin'. It sounds like it should be done in the dark. Hope you let us know what is going on soon. Cute, ME

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-08-12 05:49 PM

Now now Mr Bill, you need to stop going to the park at night by yourself. Take a date maybe she could help you figure it out.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-17 02:00 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, the mystery goes on! (giggles in delight) The world may never know! (smiles) This delightful poem made me laugh, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!