Open Poetry #15 |
Tiffany the Cartoon Girl..............I Love You |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I love her, Her name is hard To say for me The bouncy ball Will not fall When I want to say it… Tiffany, I love you… The bouncy ball Is on its way With words I didn’t want to say, I need you, Be with me- But you’re a drawing... Such artistry As you are In color And in my heart… Bright red lips Make me want To kiss you… I love you… Tiffany… The bouncy ball Is on its way I need you You’re so perfect- You’re the girl I buy potions from In a video game Am I dumb? I love you… Tiffany… I need you. I save my gold From treasure chests Just to come And see your best I love you… Tiffany… The bouncy ball Says your name In perfumed shawl I’m not the same Since I met you- I love you. Tiffany, With golden hair The bouncy ball Hangs in mid air- It loves to say I love you, I need you, Tiffany. I will go to bed With thoughts of you, And dream of you And wake of you, I need you. The bouncy ball Must say this Then I’ll leave you With a kiss- Am I wrong To love you? I need you, Tiffany. Good night My love Mix a potion From above And bring me To your world I love you But, I can’t have you. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-12-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awww Walty, this is really sweet, Tiffany has some fine lines, it seems hey? I enjoyed. Maree |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I loved the poem.Now I can come out with my long time fantasy lusting for Betty Boop.Put a bag over her head she has a killer body. paladin |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh, this was sooo fun to read, I enjoyed it very much...thanks for the smile. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hey Tiffany you're so fine, your so fine you blow my mind, Hey Tiffany! This makes me smile. Now what game is that? I'd better monitor my son better! Hillarious and sweet! Sincerely, Regina |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
THIS...is crAzy cool! what a lustful imagination. dream hard enough and you can have her. this is very creative in spacetime! aweeee...fill in the blanks! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Adorable One LOL! Thats what you are, and that is what this poem is. I like the way you communicated it. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oke, so it's not a cartoon but my one love has always been Anne Rice's Lestat. *sighs* Also this other guy... Michel... from a book... he's a vampire too. I think it's an obsession... the whole vampire thing... I should seek treatment I think... AnyWHO! I loved it! Put me in a good mood and all that good stuff... that may partially just be knowing that I am not alone in my weirdness... haha. Thanks. Be kind, be true, be bold, be you. |
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