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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-08-12 02:20 AM


I love her,
Her name is hard
To say for me
The bouncy ball
Will not fall
When I want to say it…
Tiffany,
I love you…
The bouncy ball
Is on its way
With words
I didn’t want to say,
I need you,
Be with me-
But you’re a drawing...
Such artistry
As you are
In color
And in my heart…
Bright red lips
Make me want
To kiss you…
I love you…
Tiffany…
The bouncy ball
Is on its way
I need you
You’re so perfect-
You’re the girl
I buy potions from
In a video game
Am I dumb?
I love you…
Tiffany…
I need you.
I save my gold
From treasure chests
Just to come
And see your best
I love you…
Tiffany…
The bouncy ball
Says your name
In perfumed shawl
I’m not the same
Since I met you-
I love you.
Tiffany,
With golden hair
The bouncy ball
Hangs in mid air-
It loves to say
I love you,
I need you,
Tiffany.
I will go to bed
With thoughts of you,
And dream of you
And wake of you,
I need you.
The bouncy ball
Must say this
Then I’ll leave you
With a kiss-
Am I wrong
To love you?
I need you,
Tiffany.
Good night
My love
Mix a potion
From above
And bring me
To your world
I love you
But,
I can’t have you.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-08-12 02:31 AM


Awww Walty, this is really sweet, Tiffany has some fine lines, it seems hey?  

I enjoyed.

Maree

paladin
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2 posted 2001-08-12 10:46 AM


I loved the poem.Now I can come out with my long time fantasy lusting for Betty Boop.Put a bag over her head she has a killer body.

paladin

Janette
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3 posted 2001-08-12 02:09 PM


Oh, this was sooo fun to read, I enjoyed it very much...thanks for the smile.
rwood
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-08-13 05:55 AM


Hey Tiffany you're so fine, your so fine you blow my mind, Hey Tiffany!   This makes me smile. Now what game is that? I'd better monitor my son better! Hillarious and sweet!
Sincerely,
Regina

cruz
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since 2000-07-18
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Dallas,Texas USA
5 posted 2001-08-14 12:18 PM


THIS...is crAzy cool! what a lustful imagination.  dream hard enough and you can have her.  this is very creative in spacetime! aweeee...fill in the blanks!
Temptress
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6 posted 2001-08-14 06:36 PM


Adorable One
LOL! Thats what you are, and that is what this poem is.

I like the way you communicated it.


Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
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7 posted 2001-08-14 06:46 PM


Oke, so it's not a cartoon but my one love has always been Anne Rice's Lestat. *sighs* Also this other guy... Michel... from a book... he's a vampire too. I think it's an obsession... the whole vampire thing... I should seek treatment I think...

AnyWHO!

I loved it! Put me in a good mood and all that good stuff... that may partially just be knowing that I am not alone in my weirdness... haha. Thanks.  

Be kind, be true, be bold, be you.

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

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