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FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-07-13 10:59 PM

Pack the bowl and squeeze my hand
So you might understand why these nights are so special to me
And in the haze he comes into view
So I smile seeing he brought me food
But I can't help but laugh at my own foolishness
We aren't even doing the speed limit
And the music is playing so quiet while we sing so loud
Smile while we're all still friends
Tomorrow always comes again
And I have to pretend it was unusual
This is what weekends used to be about

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2001-07-13 11:12 PM

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Smile while we're all still friends
Tomorrow always comes again
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everytime i find my way in this poem, i get lost again......i like it i like it.. !

i like the way you write..a bit abstract, yet simple..simple abstract..a bit contradictory..(did i spell that right? is that a word?.. )

you new to the blue? good to read you

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-07-13 11:18 PM

FireDancer-
   I must echo my friend, dg...I too
   love the simple, yet abstract style
   of writing..
   i like this alot!
   Welcome to Passions!

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-07-13 11:57 PM

Almost sounds as if you are dating your former, or latter, spouse...and if not that...then an old boyfriend...

and there's a whole school of nervousness attending...

but that's just one observance...on another read, I might see something...else...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-14 02:22 AM

I like it alot, but I get totally confused as I walk/wade/run through it. No matter the mode.

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

5 posted 2001-07-14 08:24 AM

Firedancer,
I am going to agree with my friends dg and vlraynes...a bit abstract but wonderfully done! I like this type of writing...pretty new to me, but I'm getting used to it! Welcome to passions....
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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