Open Poetry #15 |
Touching |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching As she took my hand I could feel her touching my heart. Will she be the woman I love? I don't know but she has a good start. Jameslee@August11,2001 |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hold on to her till you know JamesMichael. Really loved this little gentle verse. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write, James. All writing comes |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
James - you are such a romantic. You will know when she does have your heart!! Enjoyed. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very sweet, James, I wish you luck... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So simple, so powerful, so lovely. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful words, promising love? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ You say this so gently ... A special touch says so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Simple says a lot. A simple touch can reach so deep. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Be careful she could be a martian! I saw that on t.v. once - it is in their hands just kidding! Loved it, and bet she loves ya too! To see real beauty ~ try closing your eyes! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
James, you write such beauty from the heart. I hope she turns out to be the one. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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