Open Poetry #15 |
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Moon |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Moon Let me stretch Before you Not in worship But in splendor At the beauty You bestow In your ever Changing moods Do you see how All the lights Of heaven sparkle In delight at Your majestic Presence Oh moon, An ever present Comfort to my Soul Thank You |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i too share your love for the moon...she is a very influential part of my life..i enjoyed this poem very much. ~Dawn |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The lycanthrope in me stirs... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Dawn : Thank You! I woke up in the night to a beautiful moon.... out came the pen Mark: Lycanthrope? |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
hoooowla lulia, kind to the moon we dance, to moon we sing, thank you for words in kin we begin. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know one who will be stirred by this...well done Zinsser... |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Your use of simple language strengthens the impact of this poem reminding me of the influence the moon has over bodies of water. Very nice, Zinsser. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zinsser, Your moon light is bright. Enjoyed |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Redheart: Your Welcome! Sunshine: Thank You! Poet: Thanks, I like to Keep it Simple Seymore: Thanks! Thank You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful...helen |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Helen: Thanks! |
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