Open Poetry #15 |
I Hear You - repost, 6/2000 - SJ |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My child, I've heard your whispers when you speak to the silence in your mind, you ask me what I see in you if I see in you any reason or rhyme. I see the great cheer in you and in you I see the delight, as you go forth to the less fortunate and guide them through the night. I see the shame in you for past transgressions wrought, I see the forgiveness that you ask for you've realized what can't be bought. I see in you, my child, the hurt over your stubborn pride, and I would ask that you continue to pray and from me, never hide. I see past pain, and continued hope I see troubled shadows creep within, I see you raise your eyes to heaven I see the tremble in your chin. In your eyes I see your grace, I see the tears well up in your eyes every time you lift your face your love cannot be compromised. I see a heart that bares its soul I see you impart great golden goals even though yours have not been met you've prayed to me, I don't forget. I see you try to do your best, and every day you wonder "oh my ~ did I slip, break a heart, or worse?" that's when I caught you on the fly. O my child, continue on, do your best in my name and continue please to pray to me, and I will keep you from shame. Love, God ©KRJ 22 June 2000 |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Stunning, stirring and sedate, a word from God to those who can relate. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Karilea ... so beautifully captured. A wonderfully inspirational read ... just what the doctor ordered. Thank you for this lovely verse. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful and inspiring Wonderful poem Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and I will keep you from shame." and HE forgives when people sometimes can't....doesn't He? Thank you for this! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Gee ... you get a letter direct from 'Him' ... with me they play pass the buck or at best a busy signal Very beautiful Karilea Rex |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I neede to "hear" this today. Great inspiration! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Inspired and well written through the inspiration....great read as usual! |
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