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The Phantom Knight
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The Phantom Knight |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Twas once a Knight of passions deeds who rode into her heart with force he knew the things that she did need and with his sword, he changed her course. No longer was she satisfied with absent love and yearnings deep he led her to the edge of lies denial, nothing left to keep. He touched her heart and then her soul he made her his true princess bride but since he left, she's grown so cold with no recourse, she only cries. Yes such a Knight does true exist But cruelly he withdrew his kiss. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, How aptly and wonderfully written. It seems all the "Knights" that you and I know, have one too many chinks in their armor  Love, Elise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done sandra..enjoyed..  hugs~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
hmm, the black knight that foregoes his honor, and the meaning of being a knight..you deserve much better than such..very gentle smile |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I guess we all must have been his princess! Hey! That dirty @@#$%. He said I was the only woman in the world for him. Yeah right, he even stole my poetry and dedicated it to his other. AND signed it "Kiss me in your dreams, as I'll always kiss you in mine" The same as he signed all my cards and letters for 10 years! (So cruelly he withdrew his kiss), and placed it on his own tin butt good-bye. Wow! Somehow we really connect! I just had to spill that out, for the ending of your poem, was the end of us! Amazing! Sincerely, Regina |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Classic passion, and denial...heart piercing! Willie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, A familiar Knight, a familiar write. Enjoyed |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . but there is no Knight does not have a few chinks of his own. . . but there are those who can try to repair those chinks. . . and make them stronger. . . well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I've been there, trust me ... some women wear Armor too, as I found out Very well written Rex |
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