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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He asked me what he meant to me one night snuggled by the fire I smiled and said you are my only love my one true desire………. He asked how deep my love inside me went…….. I told him my passion could never be spent He asked if he was all I would need I said my heart is an open book just read……… then I looked him straight in the eye and I whispered ~ till the day I die……….. ………..you will now and forever be all of everything in this world to me……… the sound of the echoes of my soul..... the waves crashing in my sea........ the rain storm raging...... healing me..... ~SEA~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Brava! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
then I looked him straight in the eye and I whispered ~ till the day I die……….. ………..you will now and forever be all of everything in this world to me……… the sound of the echoes of my soul..... the waves crashing in my sea........ the rain storm raging...... healing me..... ================================ *smiling again* with every new write...youre tapping into that part of your muse that takes your poetry to new heights... very very cool write Susan. IWIHWT  I know no one is to blame |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you both  this was a remembering for me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
What a great remembering. Awesome poetic phrases and intent. I can feel this one. Keep it up SEA. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
SUSAN, i loved this~~ THis was so good, and it was very sweet! ~Jeff~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love is beautiful, this is love. Thanks. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, SEA, you have him at your feet, well done, geez, very well done...very gentle smile |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Sooooooo Nice! (sigh) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i hope you still have that everything.... sounds like all to me...... i've never had that, ever..... i feel a bit envious but at the same time, so very happy for you that you've experienced this joy you've written it well...... thank you for the read |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Ohh I reallllyyy like this one! I think this is one of my favorites! So sweet and loving ~sighs~ Awwwwwwww is the best thing to say  TaraB |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
*claps* very nice  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Just BEAUTIFUL ~ Thank you for sharing your remembering time~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
yes ..so beautiful |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
the sound of the echoes of my soul..... the waves crashing in my sea........ the rain storm raging...... healing me..... A great answer! I love this part, so vast the emotion. Sincerely, Regina |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very passionate! Cor |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Susan! Full of passions and remembrance, a lovely write, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You do put your whole heart into your poetry Very well done Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
SEA, this is truly one of your best. So loving and caring and true. I am a true romantic you know? " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So ... Are we still on for friday night? couldn't resist Rex ~~~ Excellent write Sea |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very good and beautiful like always |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
what a lucky guy. absolutely beautiful words... Everyone's got their demons. |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
SEA......what can I say but "beautiful"?? Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very tender and loving. I enjoyed Susan Maree |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SEA! very wonderful rememberance..everyone should have such true feelings as this, at least once in a lifetime.. great write..great imagary hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-12-2001).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how he could ever doubt you after this one, I don't know. You convinced me! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever answer all your hearts questions forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I came back in the pages for this one |
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