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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-10 04:07 AM



"Dream Weaver"

Dream Weaver, weave for me
a dream of hopes so sweet.
Show me all I wish could be
that joy when lovers meet.

Star crossed lovers joined by fate,
apart by circumstance,
together step through dreamland's gate,
join in love's sweet dance.

Teach me here your lovely art,
a dream that will endure.
Weave your dream upon my heart.
Weave the love so pure.


© Copyright 2001 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-08-10 09:10 AM



You keep the idea of always striving to find your dreams alive with this...

well done!

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2 posted 2001-08-10 01:22 PM


MoonShadow~
WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-08-10 03:58 PM




Dream Weaver, weave for me
a dream of hopes so sweet.

===========

I join you on that plea......
asking the dream weaver to weave
a dream for me.....

Lovely and a well-done piece.....

I quite enjoyed it.....

Thank you
***********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
4 posted 2001-08-10 04:48 PM


Thanks Melody.... next time I see The Dream Weaver I'll definately put in a good word for you :-)  We meet quite often when I need a little. ... er.. uh.. inspiration ;-)  Anything specific that I can pass on.. hmm.. better email it. :-)
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with you
5 posted 2001-08-11 01:01 AM


the title is one of my favorite songs  
I liked this so much!  
a very nice addition to my library  

Dulcinea
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6 posted 2001-08-11 07:09 AM


You were right, this is exquistite and perhaps the dream of every romantic heart...beautiful! Thank you for sharing it!  
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2001-08-23 03:22 AM



MoonShadow-
   This is just beautiful.
   Much enjoyed!

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2001-08-23 09:25 PM


Very nice. I beg of you to tell him that I need just one of my dreams to come to pass, before I'm too *#@ old to enjoy them..
Sandra

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Canada eh.
9 posted 2001-08-23 09:40 PM


Oh so lovely...don't know how I missed this one before. Very well done....
To sleep, perchance to dream. *big sigh*, Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
10 posted 2001-08-23 10:17 PM


Truly enchanting. What a lovely piece you have written here, it makes my heartstrings pull. My compliments.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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