Open Poetry #15 |
Angel In Flight |
WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
I dedicate this poem to a true Angel, my good friend Antonella, I hope she never fly's away. Angel In Flight by White Knight Fear, Darkness, No light. Deepest part of night. Quiet, No sound. I could see nothing around. Loneliness, Despair, Gasping for air. All is lost, Gone, Doomed, Empty black room. A scent wafts upon the air, A scent from heaven, Up there That scent, I know it well, Hope it gives Mint, And flowers in bloom, That wonderful scent, When you enter the room. I listen, I hope, I pray, I hear a soft flutter, The flutter of angel wings afar. I turn toward the sound, I run in the darkness, I trip on the ground, And fall down. I look up, Searching, Searching all around, While I stumble off the ground. Faintly, I see a distant light, Fluttering in the night. Heart thumping in my chest, I hope upon hope, That I will see the rest, Cautiously I step forth, Hoping what I see is real. Before her now, I kneel. The angel fly's around me, To see if I am for real. I am awestruck by her beauty. I look into her eyes, I fall deeply inside, Lost in the wonders of the angel. As she turns away, I know she knows me now, Knows who I really am. She smiles, The darkness slips away. She flitters off, My angel in the night. I watch until she is out of sight. I wonder was it all a dream, Was she real, As it seemed? Then I smell the scent of mint, And I know, She was there. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is extremely lovely, nice, delicate and tender. She is surely enamored by your loving words. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The smell of mint.... warm fresh bread, and/or the scent of Old Spice, bring two wonderful angels to me... it is amazing what senses can bring to one... enjoyed! Thank you! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I like it...well done Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
angels are always there. . . and it's good that you have yours. . . well done. . . I liked the way that it flowed onto the page. . . like being in a dream. . . as all angels should be. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
WK, Your words are inspiring. Dont lose the faith. Your Friend agent |
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