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This Reality |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
You said I’ve captured you With my mind Through what I wrote That came with so much …thoughts Perhaps you’ve not known That I’ve also pondered How so I’ve become Such a captive of …your soul Yes indeed I’ve assured you That I held on to my heart It would only be you that The truest of me …unveiled But did you picture me perfect? I hope you’ve not I’ve entered this world With feelings so …entwined Words were exchanged Feelings implied All these flowed With emotions that could only be …inferred What was it that felt heavy When you said you’ve wished For another world where we could meet Tis time, you and me, unbound and …freed Whereabouts’ tis alternative world I asked myself, that we be released And search for new breath to live within For now I could only think the place is …dreams -------------------------------------------- Gom, my dear pal... Till then, we remain in this virtuality Which sometimes seem So much of a reality Only to be beckoned by an awakening …irony |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I do believe I know what you mean.. Very nicely put. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
WELCOME! Realities are so harsh, but learning for us. Dreams are good for the spirit. Don't give up! Enjoyed! Sincerely, Regina What lies behind us and what lies before us |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent write! I really enjoyed the "heart" in this. *smiles* ~Tier |
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