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Sweet Entwine.........
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Sweet Entwine......... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Knowing this: the time they have is fleeting does not slow this tormenting ache within nor persuade these two hearts as one, beating to reduce their tempo, when skin meets skin Yet they touch as though they have forever engraving upon their souls, sweet entwine as candles burn essence of lavender bathing bodies in softly subdued shine Love this pure calls to the night, gentle hush passion guides them toward a heavenly height dreams unfolding, without a need to rush brings them to peak of romantic delight Tender kissing by light of fading moon These lovers find, morning has come too soon ~SEA~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I do believe I have just read a wonderful sonnet....SEA....this is beautiful! How long have you been hiding this talent? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Knowing this: the time they have is fleeting does not slow this tormenting ache within nor persuade these two hearts as one, beating to reduce their tempo, when skin meets skin Yet they touch as though they have forever engraving upon their souls, sweet entwine as candles burn essence of lavender bathing bodies in softly subdued shine =============================== this is exquisite... you should be very proud of this... youve just taken your poetry to the next level. can you see me smiling from here?  very very well done poetess of the Sea. jm I know no one is to blame |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
From SEA~ to shining SEA~ Exquisite~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis a very Sweet Entwine, indeed - This piece is wonderfully intimating... Makes ya want the night to go on forever..  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Deca~ thank you sooooo much I am just getting the hang of this, Interloper is a good teacher Janet~ smiling right back at ya! thank you for that.....Marge~ thank you! hugs to you too! Nan~ I wish the nights could last longer thank you ~SEA |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
A beautiful moment shared so beautifully. Well done ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow SEA, this is very, very good. Not used to seeing sonnets from you. The form really does you good. Or is that well? I can't write. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is simply lovely A delight to read Liz |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice sonnet, I agree, dreams shouldn’t be rushed. Gloom |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Interloper is a good teacher!!!! ROFL ok, send him my way!!! SEA can we talk? I mean this is passionate, maybe I can learn a few things from reading your words and his! I love this! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - what a sensual sonnet! - perfect in every way. It's official, you CAN do every type of poetry Well done!~Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now! Look at you, with all your talent hanging out of your jeans will ya? Sea, this was simply delightfully perfect in every single way. I am scared to try one but you have inspired me to give it a shot. Sea, simply lovely (will add this one to the page okay?) he he ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
This is so tender and beautiful Sea...wonderfully done. *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very "Sweet Entwine" indeed!!! You do know how to bring a little smile each day to the world don't you. Wonderful writing. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I do believe that this makes you a poet Lariat, One who has mastered all of the forms of poetry? Great job on this one SEA. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SK~ thank you PK~ first one solo and I'm glad you liked this, you are the master of sonnets Elizabeth~ thank you so much PG~ no, never rushed thank youKathleen~ yes, for sonnets you silly goose email him, I bet you two could make gorgeous poetry together!! thank you Melissa~ I don't know about that LOL I have lots to learn yet but thanks for the vote of confidence! Sharon~ it is?! WHERE??? LOL oh you could do beautiful sonnets!!and yes, add away.... thank youDulcinea~ thank you Cowboy~ so do you dear man.....I smile just seeing your name thank you Shadow~ no, not yet anyways LOL thanks though...still learning...and lovin it! ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, You write sooo beautifully! I LOVED this and hope to see many more sonnets from you! Just wonderful my friend   TaraB |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sea, very, very beautiful! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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